Description of Issue
In section 21.1, while you have a good outline of what needs to be done, you should include the planning part. Meaning some metric of how much resources you expect your group to take for each deliverable (for example, expected number of days to complete).
Same with section 21.2, also state how you would allocate resources and time to it. As well as when you expect each component to be finished by.
Artifact Under Review SRS volere: Section 21
Team Number for Team Doing the Review Team 2
Description of Issue In section 21.1, while you have a good outline of what needs to be done, you should include the planning part. Meaning some metric of how much resources you expect your group to take for each deliverable (for example, expected number of days to complete).
Same with section 21.2, also state how you would allocate resources and time to it. As well as when you expect each component to be finished by.