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TeamMoegMC / TheWinterRescue

Use your hands and wisdom to ignite the last hope of mankind in the wind and snow ❄️ - Minecraft 1.16.5 Modpack
https://www.curseforge.com/minecraft/modpacks/the-winter-rescue
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Minor grammar corrections, suggestions and a typo correction #73

Closed collin-marando closed 9 months ago

collin-marando commented 9 months ago

Line 7 & 10: [Grammar] In these sentences, "its" is a possessive pronoun, and should not have an apostrophe (it's = it is). Line 9: [Suggestion] Reordered the sentence to make clear that the Bellow is what should be right clicked. Line 10: [Correction] Says another Tuyere can be added, but the ponder animation shows another Bellow being added. Line 43: [Grammar] Replaced comma with period, as the second statement is a new sentence. "Require" should be 3rd person "Requires" Line 55: [Grammar] "throw" should be past participle "thrown". Line 58: [Grammar]

collin-marando commented 9 months ago

I've been very descriptive with this PR to show competency, but I'll likely be less wordy for future ones and just make the suggestions. Please let me know what level of detail you'd prefer for future PRs. I'll be happy to comply.

I'll also be sure to make a role request in the discord if/when this change is merged. Thanks.

yuesha-yc commented 9 months ago

Thanks. Descriptions are helpful! But you don't need to spend too much time on them. We understand English grammar. There are just some oversights.