search

ThatGeoGuy / ENGO500

A repository for the 4th year project course (ENGO 500). The project involves using sensors to develop an Internet of Things (IoT) application using the Open Geospatial Consortium (OGC) standard (currently in draft).
Apache License 2.0
3 stars 3 forks source link

Edited Project proposal #13

Closed b-en closed 11 years ago

b-en commented 11 years ago

@ThatGeoGuy We may need to add some time to the gaant chart of acquiring (purchase & shipping) sensors for the prototype

Made 5 minor grammar corrections. Note that the font sizes were not consistent in the ODT file when I opened it, although they look fine in the PDF (I did not generate a new PDF).

Section: change

background IoT: removed the word resulting from "The term ‘Internet of Things’ (IoT) refers to the resulting network formed between tangible objects and their virtual counterparts, and is the result of linking these two representations via an internet like structure.

Objectives 3b: Changed "Collect set of test data" to "Collect a set of test data"

Methods- Organization/Management: Changed project's to projects and projects to project's.

Removed some random comma

ThatGeoGuy commented 11 years ago

I've looked over the changes, one particular issue is that Microsoft Word does not edit documents (.odt, at least) properly. Many minor changes were also present in the final file (hyperlinks displaying in ToC, font size issues, heading styles were changed) so I re-did your edits using LibreOffice 4.1, and will push this commit shortly.