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ThatGeoGuy / ENGO500

A repository for the 4th year project course (ENGO 500). The project involves using sensors to develop an Internet of Things (IoT) application using the Open Geospatial Consortium (OGC) standard (currently in draft).
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Intro and Background #17

Closed acummins closed 10 years ago

acummins commented 10 years ago

See Meeting Minutes wiki page for 23/10/2013

Both Alex C and Kathleen A are assigned.
The final document was randomly split between the two of us so that we can each contribute something to GitHub.

ThatGeoGuy commented 10 years ago

Some breaks could be used in the text. Particularly, relevant imagery or figures/diagrams to explain some of the background concepts should be used. Otherwise, what you've provided looks like a wall of text. I'm also suggesting that we move our "motivation" and key objectives "a shelf system that provides information about facing and customer tracking", to a separate section, as many of our sections (mine and @b-en included) reiterate this in excruciating detail.