ThomasFaria / retex-innovation-insee

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reformulation proposal #19

Closed RLesur closed 3 months ago

RLesur commented 3 months ago

Here:

choosing technologies that foster autonomy won’t actually foster autonomy if their complexity acts as a deterrent from widespread adoption in the structure.

I suggest:

choosing technologies that foster autonomy will not actually foster autonomy if their complexity acts as a barrier from widespread adoption in the organization.