crissogb
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2 months ago hi Elizabeth! i was asked to comment on your pull request, sorry i wrote this already in english hope that's okay with you. it all looks very good to me for the most part, with a few mistakes. i've made a list of errors and nitpicks i could find:
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in the tt02/000/_index.es.md file:
- the title says "Proyecto de prueba de inversor 0", it seems they mistook the number of the original title ("0 Test Inverter Project") as part of the title itself, instead of as a way to enumerate the title (following the pattern of all the other project titles).
- line 28: i would put the word "on" in quotes or allcaps to make it easier to read, and also because it's a word in a different language.
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for each tt0X.es.md file there's the following around line 20-22:
- the original line says "submitted to efables ####q chipignite shuttle", and it was translated to "enviado a efabless ####q chipignite transporte", which doesn't quite make sense gramatically. also, i haven't been translating the term "shuttle" as it doesn't really have an equivalent in this context, so i think it'd be to write it as "Enviado al shuttle Efabless ####Q chipIgnite". (replacing #### of course)
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in the tt02/_index.es.md file:
- line 65: "fluido" -> "fluído"
- line 85: "Controlador de servicio" should be "Controlador de ciclo de trabajo"
- line 86: "FPGA SRAM serie súper lenta" should be "FPGA SRAM serial súper lenta".
- line 151: "No restaurar la raíz cuadrada" should be "Raíz cuadrada no restauradora"
- line 155: "Prueba de anillo OSC" should be "Prueba de oscilador de anillo"
- line 225: there's a typo: "semgentos" -> "segmentos"
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in the tt03/_index.es.md file:
- line 70: "Solo por un momento, " sounds odd, i'd use "Me tomaré el tiempo para decir, "
- line 75: "todos los que ha contribuído" -> "todos los que han contribuído"
- line 81: "por ver que ocurre" -> "por ver qué ocurre", and "installar" -> "instalar"
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in the tt04/_index.es.md file:
- line 51: "silicio personalizado de mi diseño" sounds odd, i'd use "silicio personalizado diseñado por mí"
- line 65: "increiblemente" -> "increíblemente"
- line 69: "No puedo enfatizar cuanto aprendí" sounds unnatural, i'd use "No me canso de repetir cuánto aprendí"
- line 77: "experiencia practica" -> "experiencia práctica"
- line 90: "ina increíble experiencia" -> "una increíble experiencia", and "La existencia de una forma barata y eficaz manufacturada" sounds like it's missing a few words -> "La existencia de una forma barata y eficaz para mandar a fabricar chips interesantes y experimentales"
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i can't speak for the legal accuracy of the translation, but i can point out the little typos that i've found in terms/_index.es.md:
- line 9: "a aceptar estos Terminos" -> "a aceptar estos Términos"
- line 30: "responsable for cualquier Diseño" -> "responsable por cualquier Diseño"
that's all from me!
mattvenn
Hola Elizabeth! Puedes enviarme un email? matt@tinytapeout.com Un saludo!