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I'm not so sure.
I thought about a gradient slowly graying out the text from top to bottom, so that you can read the first lines and increasing the transparency.
Hm, I don't think the Reveal is a good idea. It is like these paywalls and we are not like that. I do like the explanatory paragraph.
Yeah I wasn't sold on it myself. With the transparency idea, how would the rest of the text become readable? Or would it be just be noticeably paler but still readable even at the bottom? Drafted this PR for now.
Alternatively, we could replace the button which an on scroll effect. So while scrolling down the text gets unblurred. This could give less a feeling of a paywall, and still somehow indicating that the future is blurry.
Btw. I got offline feedback for the world driven project:
Yeah I wasn't sold on it myself. With the transparency idea, how would the rest of the text become readable? Or would it be just be noticeably paler but still readable even at the bottom? Drafted this PR for now.
Yeah, I thought, that it is still somehow readable, maybe even an easter-egg in the part which is not readable. Something like: "If you read that far you seem interested, how about heading over to the repository' or 'If you read that far, you get a beer, open an issue here'
We could also apply the scrolling idea here. If you scroll further it gets less transparent.
Alternatively, we could replace the button which an on scroll effect. So while scrolling down the text gets unblurred. This could give less a feeling of a paywall, and still somehow indicating that the future is blurry.
Yeah, I might play around with this idea and see if I can get something I like. I wasn't a fan of the button (though I didn't really have the paywall association until you mentioned it) so a scroll-based effect seems good.
- Logo is ~shitty~ not optimal
Agreed. I quite like the colour scheme chosen but that's about it.
- Text too long, TL;DR appreciated
I can see the value of a TLDR at the top of the page. I don't consider 1200 words too long myself, but I know others might.
- Maybe more pictures to make it better readable and understandable
Not sure what pictures we could include really? Could show the World Driven messages I suppose but I don't think that adds much to it. I think the TLDR at the top and perhaps a re-write that trims some of the fat might be sufficient.
I think a TLDR could make sense, I'm not sure how to formulate the idea in 1-2 sentences.
Maybe we could split parts up on to different pages (home
, how it works
, ...). IMHO the last weeks improved a lot, so I think it will take some time for me before I don't like the current anymore and I'm motivated to improve further :-)
Also, the feedback is from a single person, so good to know, but not necessarily a task that needs to be addressed right now.
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See what you think of this. It's more subtle but I think it certainly works better than the blur and button.
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I think this should work. The implementation is actually better than my initial attempt as it should work (to some degree) on all screen sizes whereas the last one didn't work on small screens. Let me know if you think any tweaks are needed.
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Not sure if this is quite what you had in mind @TooAngel but I think it's at least close. Added a blurred effect to the latter two phases with a button to 'reveal' them and an explanatory paragraph.