page numbers at the beginning (fixing #314 should cause 2-compile latex and solve this, I think?)
in the acknowledgments, capitalize the word "Foreword"
in Figures 1.7 and 1.8, I suggest we write in the caption something like "This figure is not quite done yet; there are still many improvements to be made!"
p51 : "Stop! can you scrape..." should be shifted to the next page (latex spacing... for this one we need to be careful that it doesn't mess up anything else afterwards in that chapter)