Closed mjhawkins closed 10 months ago
I went through the text, fixed some issues, made some revisions and added some comments. You'll likely have to cherry pick this one locally - since you may reject some of my suggestions.
@mjhawkins can you move your comments on discussion points into an issue?
I went through the text, fixed some issues, made some revisions and added some comments. You'll likely have to cherry pick this one locally - since you may reject some of my suggestions.