Wetlands in Utah- very minor change in wording

wetlandsDiane commented 8 months ago

On what web page are you requesting a change?

https://geology.utah.gov/water/wetlands/wetlands-in-utah/

Describe the change(s) you would like to request.

Change the very first sentence on this page from: Utah may be the second driest state in the nation and considered a cold desert climate, but wetlands are found throughout the state.

To this: Though Utah is one of the driest states in the nation with a cold desert climate, wetlands are found throughout the state.

How Urgent is this?

Low

If high urgency, please explain.

No response

Additional notes

Very minor change based on info Kim Wells provided saying that the stat is inaccurate!!

Mackenzie-Cope commented 8 months ago

@wetlandsDiane The page has been updated. Good call on modifying that sentence from Kim's FYI email. https://geology.utah.gov/water/wetlands/wetlands-in-utah/

wetlandsDiane commented 8 months ago

I can't take credit- Pete Goodwin brought it to my attention!

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@wetlandsDiane https://github.com/wetlandsDiane The page has been updated. Good call on modifying that sentence from Kim's FYI email. https://geology.utah.gov/water/wetlands/wetlands-in-utah/

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