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Health and Restoration #43

Closed Mackenzie-Cope closed 3 years ago

Mackenzie-Cope commented 3 years ago

@marshallrobinson

marshallrobinson commented 3 years ago

looks good

Mackenzie-Cope commented 3 years ago

@mikehylland

mikehylland commented 3 years ago

  1. Health and Restoration thumbnail images: In caption for far right photo, recommend replacing "controlled" with "prescribed" (pretty sure "prescribed burn" is the currently preferred term).

  2. Under Wetland Assessment, second paragraph, first sentence: Change "wetland" to "wetlands" (...function of Utah's wetlands...).

  3. Under Common Wetland Stressors: In the "Altered Hydrology" info window, check for a hard return(?) after "inundation" (the second line of text ends prematurely after just two words, at least under my monitor's aspect ratio).

  4. Under External Links, Utah's Wetland Program Plan 2018-2023: In the first line of the text block, Utah's Wetland Program Plan should be italicized (i.e., report title). In the last line, hyphenate "wetland-specific."

  5. General question for Diane: Should there be some mention of the effect of climate variability on wetland health? The stressors/sources of impact focus on human activities, but don't wetlands also respond to natural and/or human-caused variations in climate? Seems like an obvious question, and maybe a simple mention is warranted(?).

  6. Everything else looks great!

jackie-dewolfe commented 3 years ago

Comments are addressed. Will look into #5 with Diane.

Mackenzie-Cope commented 3 years ago

Diane followed up. We added a couple sentences to two sections addressing climate variability. Done!