Closed Mackenzie-Cope closed 2 years ago
Mack Review
Looks good overall. Good work! -Is it possible to link the title of the Utah Core Research Center to that page in addition to the "More Information" link? -This is just a thought, and I don't know how it would look in practice. What about creating a 1- or 2-column bulleted list after "The facility currently holds:"?
Is there a Github issue for the Energy News page? I had a couple of suggestions for that page.
DONE -linked the UCRC title -Added a 2-column list, looks good that way. -Marshall already added a new issue for the Energy News page, will be addressed.
MDH Comments: In the intro paragraph, where we refer to “base and precious metals, industrial minerals, and uranium,” we may want to get a suggestion from Steph Mills on adding a critical minerals mention.
In the Carbon Sequestration pop-up, recommend replacing “or sequestration” with “and storage.” Recommend changing “to slow or reverse atmospheric CO2 pollution” to “to reduce atmospheric CO2 concentrations.” Recommend deleting “and to mitigate or reverse global warming.” So, suggested revised text: Carbon sequestration is the long-term removal, capture, and storage of carbon dioxide from the atmosphere to reduce atmospheric CO2 concentrations.
Sent an email to Steph about adding critical minerals.
Addressed carbon seq. pop-up.
Waiting on Steph for crit. minerals bit? Otherwise looks good!
Steph got back to me and we're leaving it out of the paragraph. She said it's covered enough with the mention of industrial minerals and metals.
Preview Link: https://geology.utah.gov/?page_id=55978
Replaces this page: https://geology.utah.gov/resources/energy/