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Oil Sands/Tar Sands #69

Closed Mackenzie-Cope closed 2 years ago

Mackenzie-Cope commented 3 years ago

Preview Link: https://geology.utah.gov/?page_id=50250

Replaces this page: https://geology.utah.gov/resources/energy/tar-sands/

jackie-dewolfe commented 3 years ago

I wonder if we have any other images for this? I looked on our site, just think it needs something?

Mackenzie-Cope commented 3 years ago

@jackie-dewolfe I couldn't find any more images for tar sands or oil sands. We could ask MVB for some? Or I took out the gallery and just added a map and a single image to the text. Check it out and see what you think.

jackie-dewolfe commented 3 years ago

Looks better, I just did some more configuring on the page with those two images.

Mackenzie-Cope commented 3 years ago

Mack Review

[x] All Links Checked
[x] Design Uniformity
[x] Photo Captions
[x] Mobile SLM Correct

marshallrobinson commented 3 years ago

Looks good to me.

Mackenzie-Cope commented 2 years ago

MDH Comments: Fourth paragraph: This paragraph is currently a single (long, with 9 commas!) sentence, and is a bit hard to follow. Recommend breaking it up into at least two sentences to improve clarity.

Fifth (last) paragraph: I think “oil sands companies” should probably be changed to “oil sand companies” (similar to “oil sand deposits” used earlier). Also, would it be more accurate to say that a few deposits are in various stages of commercial development, rather than a few companies?

jackie-dewolfe commented 2 years ago

Addressed all comments

Mackenzie-Cope commented 2 years ago

Looks good.