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Oil Shale #70

Closed Mackenzie-Cope closed 2 years ago

Mackenzie-Cope commented 3 years ago

Preview Link: https://geology.utah.gov/?page_id=46881

Replaces this page: https://geology.utah.gov/resources/energy/oil-shale/

Mackenzie-Cope commented 3 years ago

For future reference (aka if MVB asks), I did not include the following broken external links because I couldn't find the current link or the org or webpages have been discontinued.

Mackenzie-Cope commented 3 years ago

Mack Review

marshallrobinson commented 3 years ago

Shale is a fine-grained sedimentary rock composed of mud containing clay and silt-sized particles of other minerals.

Shale is a fine-grained sedimentary rock composed of a mud rich in clay- and silt-sized particles of other minerals.

Mackenzie-Cope commented 2 years ago

DONE -fixed wording

Mackenzie-Cope commented 2 years ago

MDH Comments: Intro paragraph, first sentence: Not sure about the “particles of other minerals” at the end of the sentence, as no other minerals besides these have been mentioned (i.e., other than what?). Consider something like, “clay- and silt-sized sediment grains.”

Nice photo of the oil shale sample, but something for scale would be helpful.

Again, great “presentation” of the Presentations, Posters, etc. (all the needed info for reference citations appears to be provided).

jackie-dewolfe commented 2 years ago

Addressed- Intro paragraph, first sentence: Not sure about the “particles of other minerals” at the end of the sentence, as no other minerals besides these have been mentioned (i.e., other than what?). Consider something like, “clay- and silt-sized sediment grains.”

Oil shale example with scale? - Nice photo of the oil shale sample, but something for scale would be helpful.

Again, great “presentation” of the Presentations, Posters, etc. (all the needed info for reference citations appears to be provided).

Mackenzie-Cope commented 2 years ago

Looks good.