V² > Plan > True North

[VillageHubertChen]

@VillageHubertChen commented on Fri Apr 08 2016

• [x] Create Article → Targets & True North
• [x] Find old Issue in Plan, move to here and update its content
• [x] Link Issue to Article
• [x] Link Article to Issue
• [x] Set Labels, Milestone, Assignee
• [x] Update Article to new Front Matter
• [x] Check if updated Article shows on Web Site. When saving the edit on Wed night it did not updated the web site.
• [x] Improve abstract and subtitle
• [x] Add ToC to Front Matter
• [x] Set readiness to developing
• [x] Write Article
• [x] review by SL
• [x] review by GI
• [x] edit by BC & TC
• [x] set readiness to completed
• [x] ML: Render Title Graphics
• [ ] HC: Edit and publish Title Graphics
• [ ] Create and Add the Info Graphics as per → Feedback Georg

  Writing the Article

  How the world looks like in 2021 after success of V² Modular PC

A Vision on how the world will look like in 2021 after the successful introduction of V² showing how V² improves your life. It shows you where we are going and directs us to go there.

How V² as Standard Organization looks like

Ideas

• List Targets for the next Campaigns
• Thereafter list targets for the next years
• Thereafter list True North

  Reference

• V² > Plan > True North
• Mozilla > Mission
• Mozilla > Principles aka Manifest

[georgillies]

Feedback Georg

• Abstract
  • First sentence is too long:
  • shorten: "The target and mission" to "The Mission"
  • Break into two sentences with colon after True North
  • Last sentence in the end change to: "and guides the contronitor who to get there."
• Where True North fits in
  • task lower case, end sentence with colon
  • text is great. There need to be a graphics:
  • Pyramid Graphics from Reference
  • Text in Tooltips
  • Layer # in graphics, are call out to Tooltips
  • You ar here is a red dot like the dot in a map in a park
  • Only show the name of the Layer you are here
  • Showing this on every page with you are here is helping to get an overview of the 7 Layers of V² Agile.

[VillageHubertChen]

@georgillies

Thanks for the feedback. I included all except for the Info Graphics. This will take a bit of time to make. I added it in the task list in the top comment so it will not be forgotten. Great idea!

[VillageHubertChen]

Feedback by George (Skype Call)

• forgotten V² Standards in Principles
• Change order to: V² Mission, V² Benefits, Life after V², V² Principles as per order of interest of most readers
• rewrite abstract accordingly

All changes have been implemented

[VillageHubertChen]

Feedback by Sascha

• succinct
• well to the point
• good structure

It may be noted that he smashed previous attempts :-)