[ ] please check it out and give your comment in its article issue
[ ] Please conform you want to keep the sentenc: "For those for whom the above chapters were too much prose – here come the hardcore benefits:" It does not sound right to my ears.
"How it works" paragraph was an exceptionally nice rewrite! Well done!
[ ] please trigger me for final review and bumping readiness to "Make" by making a comment after you ticked all boxes.
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