Open VillageHubertChen opened 8 years ago
@bcaswelch
I updated all pertinent information for you to make your illustration, including creating an upload folder. Once you are done, please make a comment to me and Lukas so we can design your artwork into the homepage.
List of all changes going from v01 to v02
At this point this document with only for web developer, not yet ready for designer.
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The Art Brief describes the illustration and the tooltips.
You can read on how to do that → How to Create Web Ready SVG. The idea is that your illustration is described in SVG and it need to be done in such a way that the browser renders it truthfully. This is a bit tricky, as not all SVG elements are supported by the browser. So you need to find out with try and error which ones work. It is also important to deliver non convoluted SVG source code to not make the life of the poor schmuck hell who will add the tooltip manually into the SVG source code.
The programmer will generate an HTML page and include the SVG as inline SVG into the HTML source code. He will also load the scripts needed for the interactive tooltips. When done he tests in a browser that all works as expected.
Last the programmer will add the tooltips within the SVG code and test its function in the browser. The text of the tooltips is found in the Art Brief to this project.
@bcaswelch
Thanks very much for your work and to deliver on time. Please see my review feedback.
I know we said you only need to draw three pieces and use copy paste. But after looking at the result it just felt wrong. After carefully examination of real puzzles I notices that each puzzle connector shape is different. As such, please draw accordingly. We want to deliver the message on a subconscious level that we deliver real things, that work in the real world.
The shapes you draw are not production compatible. As such no one as ever played with a puzzle that has shapes like these. As such this puzzle looks like academically correct, but not functional in the real world. This is counter our message that our designs are made for and tested in the real world.
Your parts do not mate accurately. Some angles are slightly off. Some parts have slight offsets. It is not much, but enough to say that we do not work accurately. This is also against the message we want to deliver.
This one is simple. We want to appear like a real puzzle and your design simply does not look it.
Your SVG will be used directly in the HTML page. Rendering will be done by the browser. When opening your SVG file the text was not showing. Apparently not all SVG elements are supported by the browser.
All the best for your next version. If you have any questions to my feedback, I am staying up until 9 am your time, so that all your questions are answered so your workday is productive. Please aim that your next version is good for production.
We has an appointment after your match. What happened?
Stacking of one Puzzle piece (top to bottom)
<svg>
<defs>
<clipPath id="clippath-id-1">
<path id="1" d="27 53.2 84 22"> (*2)
</clipPath>
<clipPath id="clippath-id-2">
<path id="3" d="22 19.3 56"> (*2)
</clipPath>
</defs>
<g>
<image xlink:href="URI-1" clip-path="url(#clippath-id-1)">
<path id="2" d="27 53.2 84 22"> (*1)
<text>Title 1</text> (*3)
</g>
<g>
<image xlink:href="URI-2" clip-path="url(#clippath-id-2)">
<path id="4" d="22 19.3 56"> (*1)
<text>Title 2</text> (*3)
</g>
</svg>
(_1)(Stroke, coloring, tooltip shape) (_2)(Clip path that clips the image to the path outline. No stroke not fill color) (*3)(Title of element)
URI-1 Path to image. Currently is a path to local HDD, need to changed to relative path)
Picture with the following elements
<svg>
Group Puzzle Piece 1
Path → (Stroke, coloring, shape to trigger tooltip)
Title → (Text used as title for this part in the info graphics)
ClipPath → (Same path, copied and the used to clip the picture below)
Picture → (JPG image. Clipped via ClipPath)
Group Puzzle Piece 2
Path → (Stroke, coloring, shape to trigger tooltip)
Title → (Text used as title for this part in the info graphics)
ClipPath → (Same path, copied and the used to clip the picture below)
Picture → (JPG image. Clipped via ClipPath)
</svg>
Stacking of one Puzzle piece (top to bottom)
<svg>
<defs>
<clipPath id="clippath-id-1">
<path id="1" d="27 53.2 84 22"> (*2)
</clipPath>
<clipPath id="clippath-id-2">
<path id="3" d="22 19.3 56"> (*2)
</clipPath>
</defs>
<g>
<image xlink:href="URI-1" clip-path="url(#clippath-id-1)">
<path id="2" d="27 53.2 84 22"> (*1)
<text>Title 1</text> (*3)
</g>
<g>
<image xlink:href="URI-2" clip-path="url(#clippath-id-2)">
<path id="4" d="22 19.3 56"> (*1)
<text>Title 2</text> (*3)
</g>
</svg>
(_1)(Stroke, coloring, tooltip shape) (_2)(Clip path that clips the image to the path outline. No stroke not fill color) (*3)(Title of element)
URI-1 Path to image. Currently is a path to local HDD, need to changed to relative path)
Picture with the following elements
<svg>
Group Puzzle Piece 1
Path → (Stroke, coloring, shape to trigger tooltip)
Title → (Text used as title for this part in the info graphics)
ClipPath → (Same path, copied and the used to clip the picture below)
Picture → (JPG image. Clipped via ClipPath)
Group Puzzle Piece 2
Path → (Stroke, coloring, shape to trigger tooltip)
Title → (Text used as title for this part in the info graphics)
ClipPath → (Same path, copied and the used to clip the picture below)
Picture → (JPG image. Clipped via ClipPath)
</svg>
Notes on Art
Shapes of Puzzle Pieces
Hero for Interaction / Look & Feel
Additional Notes on Illustration
Notes on updating new Puzzle Art on Homepage