I want to propose a new hero

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Hello I want to propose a new hero Everything I came up with here is not copyrighted. All works are invented by me and are not used anywhere

The hero can be made black and green. The blood has turned into a green liquid over the years. I don't know how to do a hit attack I wanted the hero's hands to be in shackles. But this is not suitable for Dota Possible with a cane I couldn't come up with a story for the hero

FOLCVAN Hero with two knives on a chain behind his back 1.SKILL

Description The hero strikes the enemy first with one knife, and then with the second. Knives on a chain fly from behind to the enemy __________________________________________________________ From the chains on which the body of the Folcvan was shackled, he made weapons, attached knives to destroy his enemies. First stab/damage 50/90/120/170 Second stabbing/damage 35/60/95/110 Interval 0.2 seconds after first hit cooldown mana 17/14/10/7 80/100/130/170 2.SKILL Description In the second skill, knives fly around the hero, first clockwise, then counterclockwise and back, dealing damage to enemies in a radius. each hit has its own damage and lifesteal to deal maximum damage from the skill, you need to hit the enemy with three twists Each hit has its own lifesteal. The first 3%, the second 3% and the third 6%. Lifesteal does not stack, works on each hit separately ________________________________________________________ Folcvan overcomes the wild rage accumulated over the years of imprisonment damage 1lvl-25/25/40 2lvl-50/50/90 3lvl-75/75/110 4lvl-100/100/160 lifesteal 3%/3%/6% cooldown mana 20/17/14/10 90/110/140/165 3.SKILL Description Passive ability. Every fifth attack gives the enemy a debuff in the form of a bleeding wound Requires 5 hits. The debuff deals damage and drains mana. Only works on heroes One goal. when changing the hero, you need to re-dial ________________________________________________ Every day was torture for him. And he dreamed of revenge. With each blow, he remembered all those who had hurt him. Wound damage per second 20/40/60/80 mana burn -20/-45/-60/75 need 5 attacks Duration 4 seconds 4.ULTIMATE Description The hero draws a triangle on the ground After the triangle is drawn, three walls appear. you can't get out of the triangle for 6 seconds chain knives will appear on each side of the wall, like on the back of the hero They must jump out of the ground and strike at opponents. each knife deals damage and adds a counter to the passive ability within reach of the knife. _______________________________________________ This is the devil's triangle. Folcvan gathered all his opponents for revenge. For all the pain and anger he felt when everything was taken from him damage per knife 30/110/140 cooldown mana 70/50/35 120/170/210 stabbing interval 1 second. That is, when a knife hits, he can do it only in a second Do not judge strictly, I just suggested. Please don't hate me. ### Example Match ID (and possibly Timestamp) _No response_ ### Screenshots _No response_

[shaileshgarg]

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[commentator24]

skill 1 like pa dagger but backstab 2nd hit behind enemy? but 2x damage instance 0.2 sec apart 280dmg 7 sec cd 170 mana with no effects. a bit weird to backstab like riki but no skill to amplify this.

skill 2 like troll whirling axe (melee) x 3 or io spirits? but last until 3x hits. 360 dmg 10 sec cd 165 mana. damage heroes only or all? seems a bit overpowered to spin 3x.

skill 3 like troll passive ? but deals 320 + 300 mana burn after 5 hits. thats a lot of dmg but im guessing only duration refreshed for next 5 hits?

ult like casting arena that traps self and opponents + willow bedlam on 3 spots? 6 sec dealing 30 knivesx 6sec on 3 sides = 180-540 dmg, 660-1980 dmg, 840-2520 dmg. thats kinda broken on top of skill 3 dmg.

the hero seems to have mana issues and imbalanced damage. obsession with knives and grudge is unhealthy on mental health (skills description encourage pleasure or "more power" from hateful revenge with knives, wounding others + seeing blood when you feel like a victim / being hurt? what happen if there are more knife attacks by children on parents / school from this feeling as if it's justified if you're a victim?

and a bit weird to summon knives on devils triangle. wouldn't it make more sense to summon a devil or make something disappear? the name devil's triangle / bermuda triangle might cause sensitive issue for actual missing people where missing ships and planes disappear + portrayal of helpless and hateful person who are trapped without help coming. Also, why years of imprisonment makes him obsessed with knives instead of chains / shackle / ball as weapon and feel justified to attack anyone / group randomly like a terrorist when you remember the pain? is he one of the bad guys / dire because he's too strong / a maniac? then why the good guys / radiant inhumanely imprison him like they're also bad guys? who's been imprisoning him? this also would make his backstory / motives to defend throne / ancient / break free from prison unclear, limited, and immature as he only wants revenge and terror for pleasure and freedom. e.g. he is free now but acting like a knife maniac. you also wanted him to be black and named folcvan which raise the issue of racial discrimination and an insult to norse mythology Fólkvangr as those who are selected by Freya enter Folkvangr.