goeiecool9999
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2 years ago Second commit contains some other corrections. I'm not sure about my correction for the first sentence and I hope I'm not changing the meaning of the sentence from what is intended. I'm fairly sure the second sentence is right though.
VegaDeftwing
English isn't my native language but I don't think that is the reason why the sentence doesn't seem to flow well to me. This is just a suggestion for a fix. If you agree it's wrong you can always word it in your own way.
If you merge this directly I do not need attribution. Public domain as far as I care, but a change like this hardly seems substantial enough to be subject to copyright.