Style suggestion to avoid a repeated word, and to simplify

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Style suggestion to avoid a repeated word, and to simplify #67

Closed jwatkin closed 8 years ago

jwatkin commented 8 years ago

In "1. Crash Course In Aurelia":

"In this chapter we are going to be going through the individual components of Aurelia."

Perhaps this could be refined to: "In this chapter, we'll go through the individual components of Aurelia." or "In this chapter, we'll examine the individual components of Aurelia."

Jim

Vheissu commented 8 years ago

Good suggestion @jwatkin I think this wording is much nicer and definitely what I will use going forward.