Vheissu / aurelia-for-real-world-web-applications-book-feedback

Post feedback as issues here on Github for the Aurelia book. Be as descriptive and honest as you like.
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Style suggestions for the feedback page #68

Closed jwatkin closed 8 years ago

jwatkin commented 8 years ago

(https://github.com/Vheissu/aurelia-for-real-world-web-applications-book-feedback)

In "Spelling and Grammar": "At present, the book is in a raw and constantly in progress state." Maybe this would sound better: "At present, the book is in a raw state." Or "At present, the book is a work in progress and is still raw."

In "Chapter/Content Suggestions" "If you had any ideas for subject content in the book, definitely let me know." Should be: "If you have any ideas for subject content in the book, definitely let me know."

Vheissu commented 8 years ago

Thanks @jwatkin just made those changes, good stuff.