Closed juntao closed 1 year ago
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Overall summary:
The majority of the patches in this pull request focus on improving the clarity, organization, and correctness of the networking-related documentation. There are several potential issues and errors identified, including missing anchor texts for links, duplicated information, incomplete descriptions of changes, lack of context or reasoning for certain modifications, and potential compatibility or functionality differences with command replacements.
The most important findings are related to the changes in list style, the clarification of asynchronous and non-blocking behavior, and the modification of code snippets for proper command usage.
To improve the pull request, it is recommended to provide more specific details about the changes made within each section, address the potential problems and errors mentioned, and ensure that the modifications align with the project's requirements and provide sufficient context and explanation for users. Additionally, validating the changes through tests or verification processes is suggested to ensure accuracy and completeness.
Key changes in this patch include:
Potential problems:
http_req
and reqwest
sections. It should be clarified whether it applies to both sections or only to a specific one.Key changes:
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Key changes in the patch:
server.md
file.The most important finding is the change in list style, from an unordered list (*
) to an ordered list (-
), for the sections on the warp API and the hyper API.
Potential problems:
Key changes in this patch:
wasmedge_wasi_socket
crate has been moved to be mentioned after the description of non-blocking sockets.Potential problems:
Overall, it seems that the patch focuses on reorganizing and clarifying the introduction of the section, but more information is needed to understand the complete set of changes made.
Key changes in the patch:
Potential problems:
Key changes:
wasmedgec
has been replaced with wasmedge compile
in two places: docs/develop/rust/socket_networking/client.md
and docs/develop/rust/socket_networking/nonblock_client.md
.Potential problems:
wasmedgec
command with wasmedge compile
. However, there is no explanation or justification for this change. It would be helpful to provide some context or reasoning behind this modification to aid understanding for users.Key changes in the patch:
wasmedge_hyper_client.wasm
, get.wasm
, and wasmedge_reqwest_demo.wasm
) in the client.md
file.wasmedgec
with wasmedge compile
for all compile commands.Potential problems:
Key changes:
wasmedgec
to wasmedge compile
in two places in the server.md
file.Potential problems:
Overall, this patch updates the compile command for better performance in the documentation related to the Rust HTTP server examples.
Key changes:
networking.md
file has been updated with changes to the content.Potential problems:
networking.md
. More details are needed to understand the extent of the changes and potential problems.Key changes:
wasmedgec
command has been replaced with wasmedge compile
.Potential problems:
wasmedgec
to wasmedge compile
. The reason for this change should be explained in the pull request or in the documentation itself. Without this information, it's difficult to determine if the change is necessary or if it introduces any issues.hello_world.md
file. It's possible that this change also needs to be applied to other files in the repository. The pull request should clarify if this is the case.wasmedge-quickjs
release (v0.5.0-alpha
) is hardcoded in the command. This could lead to issues if a different version is used in the future. It might be more flexible to use a variable or parameter to specify the version.Suggestions:
wasmedge-quickjs
instead of hardcoding it.Key Changes:
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Overall, the changes in the patch seem to be focused on improving the clarity and accuracy of the installation instructions. However, further review and validation may be necessary to ensure the changes are correct and comprehensive.
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unzip
command instead of tar
.target/release/libwasmedge_rustls.so
.Potential problems:
Key changes in this patch:
docs/develop/rust/http_service/client.md
file.docs/develop/rust/http_service/client.md
file.docs/develop/rust/http_service/client.md
file.http_req_wasi
crate in the docs/develop/rust/http_service/client.md
file.http_req_wasi
crate.http_req_wasi
crate.Potential problems:
Overall, the patch mainly focuses on improving the instructions and adding new code examples for HTTPS requests. However, it lacks some important information and details that would enhance the clarity, context, and security of the documentation.
Explanation
Improve the organization and instructions how to best use networking libraries in Rust and JS. Specifically will address HTTPS and TLS use cases.