Content Feedback - Enhancements (Include short explanation and update transcript to make it easy to skim through)

[Neha93517]

Overview

• Content title: Taking Advantage of Query Loops
• Content URL: https://learn.wordpress.org/tutorial/taking-advantage-of-query-loops/
• Are you reporting an error (such as outdated information), or providing improvement ideas?: Improvement ideas

This is my first contribution as a content creator trainee. None of these changes are urgent.

Feedback Details

The tutorial covers essential concepts effectively, and I found it highly valuable.

My suggested additions are minor enhancements which include:

• Updating transcript for spelling errors
• Explaining the use of posts per page with one of the examples.
• Adding timestamps to improve navigation.
• Making the tutorial transcript more skimmable by adding bullet points and timestamps.

Updating transcript for spelling errors

• The transcript has errors for words: customize, appetizers, recognizing as customise, appetisers, recognising

Explaining the use of posts per page with one of the examples.

• A short demonstration of Posts per page should be added. How to change posts per page is at the very beginning while explaining what we can do with the Query loop block, but it can be missed. At timestamp [4:55], we can include a short explanation of how to use 'posts per page' to show a desired number of posts.

Adding timestamps to improve navigation in the video.

• We can add timestamps in the video to make the navigation easier.

Make the tutorial transcript more skimmable by adding bullet points and timestamps.

• Highlighting parts of the content and adding bullet points where applicable can improve the readability. Here's an attempt I made to enhance the transcript and update the spelling. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ERxJaAuyA1kFjBgOT2HsCa1LkLELH6o0VlrBOqACuBA/edit?usp=sharing

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[kaitohm]

@westnz Could you take a look at this as the author, please?

[westnz]

Thank you for the feedback @Neha93517

1. I will take a look at the spelling suggestions and ways to improve the transcript. I appreciate he example you provided.
2. We cannot add timestamps to wptv yet, but I agree with you.
3. Adding an extra example might only be possible when the video gets updated in the future.

Many thanks for your contribution

[westnz]

Enhancing our transcripts is definitely something to take into consideration in the future. I wonder if this is something contributors could do @bsanevans?

[kaitohm]

@westnz Can you share more information as to what you mean by "Enhancing our transcripts"? Giving edit access on Learn to more contributors is something we should be cautious about. But having contributors add a modified transcript to a GitHub issue and then having Editors/Content Creators copy-paste that into a piece of content is something we could start right away 👍

[westnz]

Gotcha @bsanevans

Enhancing transcript - content creators could start adding headings and subheadings or even highlighting important parts to improve the readability of transcripts.