Open rfluethi opened 4 months ago
This translation is ready for a review: https://docs.google.com/document/d/14ihdMgbuqtOfB9Ayot5EjAr0jxxAEAtId80vk8mnEO0/edit?usp=sharing
@rfluethi Thank you soo much for your contribution 🥳 The content looks good, but I added some content improvements as a copy here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lxzv1qZr52BbF8Wef1VvD9Nd_fJNSPcDeyXHDqYy44I/edit?usp=sharing
@devmuhib009 I reviewed the translation. I added some content improvements inside the Google Doc. In this version it's approved :)
@BenjaminZekavica Thank you for the review
Hi @rfluethi Thanks for translating the content. I've just sent you an invitation from Learn WordPress website. Please accept the invitation and then we can proceed publishing the content.
Hi @rfluethi Thanks for your hard work, lesson has been published: https://learn.wordpress.org/lesson/de-introduction-to-wordpress-2/
I have noticed that this lesson has not yet been translated in the overview and therefore looks unfinished.
The thumbnail can be found at the following URL: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1MGLWiG-T0OzNbdLDl2maMRaWmyJFd0fe/view?usp=drive_link
The excerpt text in German could read as follows: Tauche in die Grundlagen ein und entdecke, was auch Einsteigende mit WordPress erreichen können.
Just updated the thumbnail. Thanks
Wow, you're incredibly fast! Thank you so much.
What about the excerpt text? Can we change that as well, or would it be better to wait for the Sensei update?
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Hi @rfluethi, thanks for your interest in this issue!
If you have any questions, do not hesitate to ask them in our #training Slack channel.
Thank you for contributing!
We can add manually. Do you have the excerpt translation on doc file? Or you can add the translated excerpt here, I will update.
You can find the translated slides and spoken text at: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1puvMl_q5PdxBjCK-SIRKDxQBNzoEuSZG1yMXCmW0uno/edit?usp=sharing
Sample-video-C-0-1-Introduction-to-WordPress.mp4 - Google Drive
The video was created using a synthetic voice. Once the script is approved, a person should record it with a bit more emotion.
Hi @BenjaminZekavica or anyone else, would you have time and be interested in reviewing the video? Do you know someone who could record the voiceover once the text is approved?
Dear @devmuhib009
We can add manually. Do you have the excerpt translation on doc file? Or you can add the translated excerpt here, I will update.
German excerpt text: Tauche in die Grundlagen ein und entdecke, was auch Einsteigende mit WordPress erreichen können.
@devmuhib009 @rfluethi I can review it today :)
Do you know someone who could record the voiceover once the text is approved? Unfortunately no, but maybe @devmuhib009 or somebody from the WordPress.tv have a experice about that?
Hello @BenjaminZekavica thank you for the intention for today's review. I would suggest you give it a few more days though. Because there are various suggestions for changes coming in and I would like to ask the local Slack groups for input. So you might have to do the work twice.
Adaptations from the discussion of the first version: A detailed list of all changes is available in the above-mentioned Google document. Here are the most important changes that may require further discussion:
The video was produced in the standard format of 1920 x 1080 px. We did not find any compelling reasons to use 1872 x 1080 px.
Fonts, colors, and background animation were adjusted based on the thumbnails from the Thumbnails Project to ensure a more consistent appearance.
The 'Oh She Glows' page was replaced with 'Crack Magazine,' 'No Man’s Sky,' and 'Rolling Stone.' Since the food blog 'Minimalist Baker' is already mentioned in the video, the topic is sufficiently covered. This change is also intended to increase the visual tempo.
Since the videos are meant to be used both as standalone lessons and within courses and learning paths, it is not ideal to refer to the lesson 'WordPress Essentials: Domains and Hosting.' An alternative ending has been created, which instead refers to the offerings of Learn WordPress.
If the new ending is used, the transcript will need to be adjusted accordingly. A possible text could be:
(English Version)
Conclusion:
In summary, with WordPress, you can easily create and launch your own website. WordPress provides everything you need, whether you’re a beginner or a pro. In our learning paths, courses, lessons, and workshops on learn.wordpress.org, we guide you step by step on how to get started. The Learn WordPress team wishes you the best of luck!
(German Version) Fazit: Zusammenfassend lässt sich sagen, dass du mit WordPress ganz einfach deine eigene Website erstellen und online stellen kannst. WordPress bietet alles, was du benötigst, egal ob Anfänger oder Profi. In unseren Lernpfaden, Kursen, Lektionen und Workshops auf learn.wordpress.org zeigen wir dir Schritt für Schritt, wie du starten kannst. Viel Erfolg wünscht dir das Team von Learn WordPress!
Suggestion for improvement: 'Chapter 02 Learning Outcomes'
The slide feels overwhelming because there is a lot of text displayed while also a lot of spoken content is presented at the same time. Would it be possible to show the learning objectives one by one, each appearing in sync with the corresponding spoken sentence?
Suggestion for improvement: 'Chapter 09 Outro'
On the final slide, there should be a period between “Learn” and “WordPress.org” (Learn.WordPress.org) to accurately reflect the URL. In the spoken text, however, the Training Team should be mentioned.
English: We from the WordPress Training Team wish you every success and look forward to supporting you on your journey.
Deutsch: Wir vom Schulungs-Team von WordPress wünschen dir viel Erfolg und freuen uns darauf, dich auf deinem Weg zu begleiten.
Great work @rfluethi
I am very impressed with how you have transformed the English version into German.
Two observations:
The continuous scrolling in some scenes causes visual strain, which can lead to discomfort or difficulty focusing on the content. I suggest significantly slowing down the scroll speed, or in some cases, you might consider using a static screenshot instead. Examples: 00:37 - 00:42 1:19 - 1:26 2:00 - 2:47 3:03 - 3:09 3:17 - 3:48 4:20 - 4:28
0:32, 0:37, and 0:59 - The transition to the following scenes should be slowed down and a pause inserted.
The video was created using a synthetic voice. Once the script is approved, a person should record it with a bit more emotion.
I was pleasantly surprised by the synthetic voice.
Vielen dank!
Perfect ❤️ Excellent work, @rfluethi
@rfluethi Wow, amazing job — thank you! It’s approved. 🥳 The voice is clear and easy to understand for beginners 👍 The translation is perfect.
A big thank you to @westnz and @BenjaminZekavica!
In a discussion with @jonathanbossenger, he encouraged me to write an experience report. In it, you’ll also find my thoughts on why I don't entirely agree with your perspective. 🥳
https://github.com/user-attachments/assets/d4882f60-bcd8-4f0e-84c4-4deffd0a5d69
The script and other documents will follow as soon as they are ready.
Hey Rico
Thank you for all the hard work you have put into this project so far.
Review of Video Version 02-03:
Hi Wes, Thanks so much for your feedback! I’ll work on implementing your suggestions as soon as I can find some time. Best regards, Rico
https://github.com/user-attachments/assets/de299999-30da-4540-81cd-d85c8cb5caec
All documents related to this project can be found at GitHub - rfluethi/German-translation-for-Lesson-Introduction-to-WordPress.
The key documents are:
What adjustments and steps are necessary to close this issue?
Hey @rfluethi
Once we upload the video and create and publish the lesson, we can close this Issue. I created the lesson for you so long: https://learn.wordpress.org/wp-admin/post.php?post=265255&action=edit
Do you have the ability to upload a video to WordPress.tv and edit the lesson?
At this stage, the lesson will be a standalone German lesson, not part of a learning pathway. Is this correct, @kaitohm
Hi @westnz ,
Thanks for your message. Unfortunately, I don't have access to the lesson you created.
I've uploaded the video to WordPress.tv and informed the @tt-admins on Slack.
I'm still unsure about the next steps. Should I open an issue for the next lessons in the learning path, just like with this lesson? And will the German learning path be assembled once all the lessons are translated?
Thank you for your help!
Hey Rico
I have published the video on WordPress.tv and YouTube.
WordPress.tv: https://wordpress.tv/2024/10/14/einfuhrung-in-wordpress/
YouTube: https://youtu.be/acs7lfnFdg4
Then, I added the YouTube video, thumbnail, and transcript to the lesson and published it on Learn. Lesson: https://learn.wordpress.org/lesson/einfuhrung-in-wordpress/
Great work all-round
Should I open an issue for the next lessons in the learning path, just like with this lesson? And will the German learning path be assembled once all the lessons are translated?
Yes, that's correct 👍
Vielen dank
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Many thanks for your help @westnz , @BenjaminZekavica , @devmuhib009
https://github.com/user-attachments/assets/4f6c43a5-fc2f-4b83-b715-872754472438
In this version, the synthetic voice has been replaced with the voice of @BenjaminZekavica . Additionally, some scenes have been slightly extended to better align with the new voice and the subtitles.
All project-related documents are available on GitHub: rfluethi/German-translation-for-Lesson-Introduction-to-WordPress.
Key documents at a glance:
Great work @BenjaminZekavica! ⭐
The sound quality is pleasing!
Two notes:
@westnz Thank you so much.
@devmuhib009 Do you can reopen this issue, please? :)
https://github.com/user-attachments/assets/ffb31c55-3ee5-48a6-a0ca-6b074db78c65
Key documents at a glance:
Video: Different versions of the video. Documents: Translation and production documents. Subtitles: Subtitle files in various formats.
Thank you, @westnz and @BenjaminZekavica, for your feedback! I hope I understood you correctly. I’ve made the following changes—does this align with what you had in mind? If not, please let me know so I can adjust accordingly.
0:00:40;23 - 0:00:42;20
Audio normalized and amplified. The volume was slightly reduced at the end of the sentence to improve the clarity of the closing.
0:00:42;20 - 0:00:43;07
Cut shifted by 17 frames to create a smoother transition to the next scene.
- Scene "Define WordPress" shortened by 17 frames.
- Scene "Learning Outcomes" extended by 17 frames.
0:00:44;19 - 0:00:45;07
Start of the animation "Define WordPress" moved 18 frames earlier to better align with the narration.
General Update:
The shotlist.md file has been updated to document these changes.
@rfluethi It looks good to me 👍
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