rfluethi
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1 month ago This translation is ready for a review: https://docs.google.com/document/d/14ihdMgbuqtOfB9Ayot5EjAr0jxxAEAtId80vk8mnEO0/edit?usp=sharing
Open rfluethi opened 1 month ago
rfluethi
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1 month ago This translation is ready for a review: https://docs.google.com/document/d/14ihdMgbuqtOfB9Ayot5EjAr0jxxAEAtId80vk8mnEO0/edit?usp=sharing
BenjaminZekavica
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1 month ago @rfluethi Thank you soo much for your contribution 🥳 The content looks good, but I added some content improvements as a copy here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lxzv1qZr52BbF8Wef1VvD9Nd_fJNSPcDeyXHDqYy44I/edit?usp=sharing
@devmuhib009 I reviewed the translation. I added some content improvements inside the Google Doc. In this version it's approved :)
rfluethi
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1 month ago @BenjaminZekavica Thank you for the review
devmuhib009
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1 month ago Hi @rfluethi Thanks for translating the content. I've just sent you an invitation from Learn WordPress website. Please accept the invitation and then we can proceed publishing the content.
devmuhib009
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1 month ago Hi @rfluethi Thanks for your hard work, lesson has been published: https://learn.wordpress.org/lesson/de-introduction-to-wordpress-2/
rfluethi
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1 month ago I have noticed that this lesson has not yet been translated in the overview and therefore looks unfinished.
The thumbnail can be found at the following URL: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1MGLWiG-T0OzNbdLDl2maMRaWmyJFd0fe/view?usp=drive_link
The excerpt text in German could read as follows: Tauche in die Grundlagen ein und entdecke, was auch Einsteigende mit WordPress erreichen können.
devmuhib009
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1 month ago Just updated the thumbnail. Thanks
rfluethi
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1 month ago Wow, you're incredibly fast! Thank you so much.
What about the excerpt text? Can we change that as well, or would it be better to wait for the Sensei update?
rfluethi
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4 weeks ago //assign
github-actions[bot]
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4 weeks ago Hi @rfluethi, thanks for your interest in this issue!
If you have any questions, do not hesitate to ask them in our #training Slack channel.
Thank you for contributing!
devmuhib009
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4 weeks ago We can add manually. Do you have the excerpt translation on doc file? Or you can add the translated excerpt here, I will update.
rfluethi
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4 weeks ago You can find the translated slides and spoken text at: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1puvMl_q5PdxBjCK-SIRKDxQBNzoEuSZG1yMXCmW0uno/edit?usp=sharing
Sample-video-C-0-1-Introduction-to-WordPress.mp4 - Google Drive
The video was created using a synthetic voice. Once the script is approved, a person should record it with a bit more emotion.
rfluethi
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4 weeks ago Hi @BenjaminZekavica or anyone else, would you have time and be interested in reviewing the video? Do you know someone who could record the voiceover once the text is approved?
rfluethi
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4 weeks ago Dear @devmuhib009
We can add manually. Do you have the excerpt translation on doc file? Or you can add the translated excerpt here, I will update.
German excerpt text: Tauche in die Grundlagen ein und entdecke, was auch Einsteigende mit WordPress erreichen können.
BenjaminZekavica
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3 weeks ago @devmuhib009 @rfluethi I can review it today :)
Do you know someone who could record the voiceover once the text is approved? Unfortunately no, but maybe @devmuhib009 or somebody from the WordPress.tv have a experice about that?
rfluethi
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3 weeks ago Hello @BenjaminZekavica thank you for the intention for today's review. I would suggest you give it a few more days though. Because there are various suggestions for changes coming in and I would like to ask the local Slack groups for input. So you might have to do the work twice.
rfluethi
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3 weeks ago Adaptations from the discussion of the first version: A detailed list of all changes is available in the above-mentioned Google document. Here are the most important changes that may require further discussion:
The video was produced in the standard format of 1920 x 1080 px. We did not find any compelling reasons to use 1872 x 1080 px.
Fonts, colors, and background animation were adjusted based on the thumbnails from the Thumbnails Project to ensure a more consistent appearance.
The 'Oh She Glows' page was replaced with 'Crack Magazine,' 'No Man’s Sky,' and 'Rolling Stone.' Since the food blog 'Minimalist Baker' is already mentioned in the video, the topic is sufficiently covered. This change is also intended to increase the visual tempo.
Since the videos are meant to be used both as standalone lessons and within courses and learning paths, it is not ideal to refer to the lesson 'WordPress Essentials: Domains and Hosting.' An alternative ending has been created, which instead refers to the offerings of Learn WordPress.
If the new ending is used, the transcript will need to be adjusted accordingly. A possible text could be:
(English Version)
Conclusion:
In summary, with WordPress, you can easily create and launch your own website. WordPress provides everything you need, whether you’re a beginner or a pro. In our learning paths, courses, lessons, and workshops on learn.wordpress.org, we guide you step by step on how to get started. The Learn WordPress team wishes you the best of luck!
(German Version) Fazit: Zusammenfassend lässt sich sagen, dass du mit WordPress ganz einfach deine eigene Website erstellen und online stellen kannst. WordPress bietet alles, was du benötigst, egal ob Anfänger oder Profi. In unseren Lernpfaden, Kursen, Lektionen und Workshops auf learn.wordpress.org zeigen wir dir Schritt für Schritt, wie du starten kannst. Viel Erfolg wünscht dir das Team von Learn WordPress!
rfluethi
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3 weeks ago Suggestion for improvement: 'Chapter 02 Learning Outcomes'
The slide feels overwhelming because there is a lot of text displayed while also a lot of spoken content is presented at the same time. Would it be possible to show the learning objectives one by one, each appearing in sync with the corresponding spoken sentence?
rfluethi
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3 weeks ago Suggestion for improvement: 'Chapter 09 Outro'
On the final slide, there should be a period between “Learn” and “WordPress.org” (Learn.WordPress.org) to accurately reflect the URL. In the spoken text, however, the Training Team should be mentioned.
English: We from the WordPress Training Team wish you every success and look forward to supporting you on your journey.
Deutsch: Wir vom Schulungs-Team von WordPress wünschen dir viel Erfolg und freuen uns darauf, dich auf deinem Weg zu begleiten.
westnz
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2 weeks ago Great work @rfluethi
I am very impressed with how you have transformed the English version into German.
Two observations:
The continuous scrolling in some scenes causes visual strain, which can lead to discomfort or difficulty focusing on the content. I suggest significantly slowing down the scroll speed, or in some cases, you might consider using a static screenshot instead. Examples: 00:37 - 00:42 1:19 - 1:26 2:00 - 2:47 3:03 - 3:09 3:17 - 3:48 4:20 - 4:28
0:32, 0:37, and 0:59 - The transition to the following scenes should be slowed down and a pause inserted.
The video was created using a synthetic voice. Once the script is approved, a person should record it with a bit more emotion.
I was pleasantly surprised by the synthetic voice.
Vielen dank!
rfluethi
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2 weeks ago westnz
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2 weeks ago Perfect ❤️ Excellent work, @rfluethi
BenjaminZekavica
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2 weeks ago @rfluethi Wow, amazing job — thank you! It’s approved. 🥳 The voice is clear and easy to understand for beginners 👍 The translation is perfect.
rfluethi
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2 weeks ago A big thank you to @westnz and @BenjaminZekavica!
In a discussion with @jonathanbossenger, he encouraged me to write an experience report. In it, you’ll also find my thoughts on why I don't entirely agree with your perspective. 🥳
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