Update wording of theme description in screenshot

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Closed josephfusco closed 8 years ago

josephfusco commented 8 years ago

Related to #463

Instead of

Bringing your business site to life

should we do

Bringing your business' site to life

? The first being literally a business site, while the latter is a site for your business.

melchoyce commented 8 years ago

@celloexpressions, what was your original intent with the tagline? I grabbed it from your earlier screenshot idea.

I don't feel strongly one way or the other, so happy to change it :)

melchoyce commented 8 years ago

I agree with changing the tagline since it's clearer that it's referring to the site.

I'll update the image and push up a new PR.

laurelfulford commented 8 years ago

Fixed in #468.