Not having personal information

[timchen0326]

Opening statement summary

This is a personal portfolio website

Strong positive points

Website was created with clean outlines

Critical improvements needed Maybe the addition of more personal information to introduce yourself to the audience, as well as adding more to your websites would be great Suggestions for improvement:

Trying to make your website more immersive for people to enjoy

Please consider adding/changing/removing:

-adding names -adding colours -removing unwanted information

Evaluation:

8 marks

Estimated mark:

[80] out of 100.

Reason:

Not enough information to support personal data

[DuanyiSu]

Strong positive points website is styled very nicely

Critical improvements needed

Suggestions for improvement: Adding a profile photo Adding previous work experience