Closed YoutLone closed 1 year ago
Hello David , I confused the last one of your review I need to change my index.html or not?
On Sat, 29 Apr 2023 at 12:11 AM David A. Tamayo @.***> wrote:
@.**** requested changes on this pull request. Hi @YoutLone https://github.com/YoutLone πββοΈ,
Good job so far! You have done well reaching this point of the milestone π€ . But there are some issues that you still need to work on to go to the next project but you are almost there!
- The Pull Request follows the GitHub Flow β
- The PR title and description are professional and descriptive β
- Linters are working properly β
Suggested changes
- Check the comments under the review. β¬
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Every comment with the [OPTIONAL] prefix won't stop the approval of this PR. However, I strongly recommend you to take them into account as they can make your code better. Some of them were simply missed by the previous reviewer and addressing them will really improve your application.
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In style.css https://github.com/YoutLone/Portfolio/pull/2#discussion_r1180662680:
+.other-project-tags {
- display: flex;
- list-style-type: none; +}
+.other-project-tag {
- font-family: "Inter", sans-serif;
- color: white;
- margin: 0 10px 20px 20px;
- font-size: 15px;
- background-color: #5c5c69;
- padding: 10px; +}
- Great job on creating the tags! π However, to align with the Figma template, it is necessary to reduce the spacing between them and make the background transparent. This will not only make the tags look more visually appealing but also ensure that they are consistent with the overall design of the portfolio. By following these guidelines, the tags will be easier to read and will complement the design elements of the portfolio, ultimately enhancing the user experience.
Your design
[image: Screenshot from 2023-04-28 12-31-24] https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/105117832/235216051-7018df2c-b490-45c3-94c8-2e36f713048e.png
Figma
[image: Screenshot from 2023-04-28 12-31-45] https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/105117832/235216082-206b0e6d-2a4e-43ab-a0fe-b92b93f5765f.png
In style.css https://github.com/YoutLone/Portfolio/pull/2#discussion_r1180662723:
+.skills-wrapper {
- display: grid;
- grid-template-columns: 1fr;
- font-family: "inter", sans-serif;
- font-size: 32px;
- color: white;
- list-style-type: none; +}
- You've done an excellent job organizing the skills section of your portfolio π. However, it would be beneficial if you could adjust the spacing between the elements to align with the Figma template. This will ensure that the overall presentation looks more professional and visually appealing to viewers.
Your design
[image: Screenshot from 2023-04-28 12-31-01] https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/105117832/235215414-7d6cdfe0-a8e0-4389-8a11-984f8a6cabd8.png
Figma
[image: Screenshot from 2023-04-28 12-30-50] https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/105117832/235215459-2550bdac-a16b-471d-9164-20942eaccd77.png
In index.html https://github.com/YoutLone/Portfolio/pull/2#discussion_r1180665243:
About Me
- Hello Iβm a software developer! I can help you build a product ,
- feature or website Look through some of my work and experience! If you
- like what you see and have a project you need coded, donβt hesitate to
- contact me.
- Get My Resume
- <svg
- class="skill-title-svg"
- width="27"
- height="26"
- viewBox="0 0 27 26"
- fill="none"
- xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
- <rect
- x="0.772461"
- y="12.7279"
- width="18"
- height="18"
- transform="rotate(-45 0.772461 12.7279)"
- fill="#FF6B00"
- />
Language
- JavaScript
- Ruby
- HTML
- CSS
<svg class="skill-title-svg" width="18" height="19" viewBox="0 0 18 19" fill="none" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" Frameworks
React.js Ruby on Rails RSpec Capybara
<svg class="skill-title-svg" width="18" height="19" viewBox="0 0 18 19" fill="none" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" <rect y="0.455811" width="18" height="18" rx="9" fill="#FF6B00" /> Skills
Database Management Version Control CLI API Design Web Development
- Just as a friendly reminder, it would be best to consolidate these sections into one cohesive "About Me" section. By doing this, the information provided will be easier to navigate and more organized for the reader. Additionally, having all the relevant details about yourself in one place will allow the reader to get a more comprehensive understanding of who you are and what you have to offer. This will ultimately create a more positive user experience and increase the chances of the reader engaging with your portfolio π.
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Hello David , I confused the last one of your review I need to change my index.html or not? β¦
Hi @YoutLone π, yes you need to change it
Porfolio website milestone : Module-1
In this project I :