peer review writing by Shuangyuan Yang

[Sophiaaa-Y]

Opening statement summary: This paper provides a statistical analysis of stillbirth licenses issued across four civic centers in Toronto from 2011 to 2024. The study uses different plots to illustrate the distributions of licenses across different centers and time periods. This analysis offers valuable and discussions. Strong positive: Firstly, the paper is well-constructed. It also has a table of contents includes simple and clear abstracts and introductions, data overview, results and discussions. Also, paper has beautiful plots. Critical improvements needed: In introduction part, you introductions of paper's content is perfect, but according to the rubric, your introduction part also needs to include some about the paper's structure. Besides, in your paper, there are some unknown citations. This may because as you do some reference without write them in your reference.bib file. Also, in your final submission, please remember to update your README file and usage file. Suggestions: I think you could add more reference in your paper. And in the discussion part, you could also include some about the limitations to let your paper more complete. Evaluation: 80 out of 100

[Sophiaaa-Y]

Please Update your usage.txt file, and because you don't update it in the initial submission, so the evaluation is 0/100 according to the rubric.