Opening statement summary
This paper examines the trends and distribution of stillbirth permits issued by Toronto's municipal centers between 2011 and 2024, focusing on differences across time and municipal centers.
Strong positive points
The study clearly demonstrates, through multiple views, the differences in stillbirth permit issuance trends across municipal centers.
Critical improvements needed
There is a need to include specific details in the text, especially in the discussion, reference, and appendix.
Suggestions for improvement:
Add your relevant reference.
Add a discussion of the limitations of the data set.
Ensure that all data analysis and code is thoroughly reviewed
Discuss the next steps in research based on the findings.
Evaluation:
The paper provides a solid foundation with clear data analysis and visualization, but further exploration of stillbirth anomalies and discussion of data limitations are needed and would significantly increase the depth of the study.
Estimated mark:
80 out of 100.
Reason:
based on rubric and the template provided in in-class reflection exercise 2.
Opening statement summary This paper examines the trends and distribution of stillbirth permits issued by Toronto's municipal centers between 2011 and 2024, focusing on differences across time and municipal centers. Strong positive points The study clearly demonstrates, through multiple views, the differences in stillbirth permit issuance trends across municipal centers. Critical improvements needed There is a need to include specific details in the text, especially in the discussion, reference, and appendix. Suggestions for improvement: Add your relevant reference. Add a discussion of the limitations of the data set. Ensure that all data analysis and code is thoroughly reviewed Discuss the next steps in research based on the findings. Evaluation: The paper provides a solid foundation with clear data analysis and visualization, but further exploration of stillbirth anomalies and discussion of data limitations are needed and would significantly increase the depth of the study. Estimated mark: 80 out of 100. Reason: based on rubric and the template provided in in-class reflection exercise 2.