[x] Recommend that all sections start will at least one sentence of introduction.
[x] Logical view: OK starting point. Note that you should describe how the patters have been applied either in text or describe in the diagram. There seems to be parts of the system not covered in the logical view, e.g. the network part. Please update this view to give a complete picture of the system. You might consider breaking up the logical view in multiple diagram for readability, with e.g. one overview diagram, and separate diagrams that describe parts of the system.
[x] Process view: The process view is very limited. Note that the process view should give a good description of the run-time behavior of the system. Right now, you describe just the states of the application. You should also add additional diagrams describing other run-time behavior and interaction between components, such as how the interaction between client and server will be etc. using sequence diagrams.
[x] Process view: State diagram
[x] Development view: The development view now is very high-level and not particularly helpful for assigning parts of the system to individual developers. You need more details and specify interfaces etc. Make this view practical and useful. Right now, it is nice to look at, but not very useful!
[x] Development view : Package Diagram
[x] Physical view: Ok starting point, but it lacks details e.g. how the different parts interact (what networks/protocols are used etc.)
[x] The description of views is an ok starting point, but there is plenty room for improvement. Please update this part as the project progresses and all the issues described in the comments above.
[x] Recommend that all sections start will at least one sentence of introduction.
[x] Logical view: OK starting point. Note that you should describe how the patters have been applied either in text or describe in the diagram. There seems to be parts of the system not covered in the logical view, e.g. the network part. Please update this view to give a complete picture of the system. You might consider breaking up the logical view in multiple diagram for readability, with e.g. one overview diagram, and separate diagrams that describe parts of the system.
[x] Process view: The process view is very limited. Note that the process view should give a good description of the run-time behavior of the system. Right now, you describe just the states of the application. You should also add additional diagrams describing other run-time behavior and interaction between components, such as how the interaction between client and server will be etc. using sequence diagrams.
[x] Process view: State diagram
[x] Development view: The development view now is very high-level and not particularly helpful for assigning parts of the system to individual developers. You need more details and specify interfaces etc. Make this view practical and useful. Right now, it is nice to look at, but not very useful!
[x] Development view : Package Diagram
[x] Physical view: Ok starting point, but it lacks details e.g. how the different parts interact (what networks/protocols are used etc.)
[x] The description of views is an ok starting point, but there is plenty room for improvement. Please update this part as the project progresses and all the issues described in the comments above.