Opening Statement Summary
This paper investigates the causes of TTC delays in Toronto. The paper finds that TTC is more prone to delays during peak hours.
Strong Positive Points
The paper explores the dataset with a variety of figures, providing insights to help understand how the variables in the dataset look like.
Critical Improvements Needed
Reference R and R libraries used
Explain what each variable in the dataset represents
Explain why or why not you didn't use similar datasets
Provide details on how the data is measured
Suggestions for Improvement
Maybe narrow down your topic and ask a question that is easy to answer with your figures.
Data section is worth the most marks, be sure to focus on it the most
Evaluation
-1 R not cited (auto 0)
-1 No LLM usage
-1 Title is a bit board and doesn't tell what happens at the end of paper
-4 No abstract
-3 For Data, as no explanation on similar dataset and variables in dataset
Opening Statement Summary This paper investigates the causes of TTC delays in Toronto. The paper finds that TTC is more prone to delays during peak hours.
Strong Positive Points The paper explores the dataset with a variety of figures, providing insights to help understand how the variables in the dataset look like.
Critical Improvements Needed
Suggestions for Improvement
Evaluation
Estimated Mark: 45/64
Reason for Evaluation: Please see above