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Internet Draft for the Automated Certificate Management Environment (ACME) Renewal Information (ARI) Extension
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Wording Tweak #39

Closed seanturner closed 1 year ago

seanturner commented 2 years ago

Friendly suggestion for s1 2nd para.

aarongable commented 1 year ago

Thanks for this! You're totally right that the phrasing here is awkward. I do agree with @robplee's comment improving the phrasing even further, so I'm going to approve+merge this PR, then iterate further in a follow-up. Thanks again!