abuiles / ember-cli-101-errata

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reword paragraph at location 1701 #228

Closed bambery closed 9 years ago

bambery commented 9 years ago

There is a paragraph which begins "We are iterating over every article in the model and then rendering...". The paragraph is two long and grammatically incorrect sentences. I'd suggest a better phrasing, but I am not clear on the precise meaning of the text. If you could please rewrite this entire paragraph, it would reduce confusion.

abuiles commented 9 years ago

@bambery what about the following:

In the code above, we are iterating over the model, rendering an articles-row component for each item. We are passing as attributes the article, bounding the save action to another action which is also called "save" and finally binding the articleStates to the list of possibleStates in the controller. We could have call both properties the same but we did not, so we could demonstrate that we are only assigning