-"all people who encounter me with question" -> "everyone who asks me"
-"to give them some tips" -> "as a tip for..." (the position was moved to beginning part of the sentence)
-The first sentence in the disclaimer section was broken down. (The original sentence had two "and"'s, and was a bit lengthy)
-"hip and trendy never means" -> "hip and trendy does not always mean"
(the word never was changed because hip and trendy could be suited for certain jobs)
-"all people who encounter me with question" -> "everyone who asks me" -"to give them some tips" -> "as a tip for..." (the position was moved to beginning part of the sentence) -The first sentence in the disclaimer section was broken down. (The original sentence had two "and"'s, and was a bit lengthy) -"hip and trendy never means" -> "hip and trendy does not always mean" (the word never was changed because hip and trendy could be suited for certain jobs)