adam-golab
commented
5 years ago I got in touch with my pocket native speaker to verify your changes and he's determined that the current phrasing of the sentences you've corrected is good enough.
Closed Rong-Li closed 5 years ago
adam-golab
commented
5 years ago I got in touch with my pocket native speaker to verify your changes and he's determined that the current phrasing of the sentences you've corrected is good enough.
-“for as a tip” -> “as a tip” -“To becoming” -> “to become” -Sentence were reconstructed to be more correct in grammar. -Some passive voices were added to remove the extensive usage of pronouns. -“Rather than” here won’t connect these two sentences logically. -Sentences with different purposes were separated from the original single sentence. Fixed#49