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Bachelor thesis in Computer Science
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Abstract #46

Closed joakimpersson closed 10 years ago

joakimpersson commented 10 years ago

line 1 "real-world behavior optimization problems" is too long. Try to split a part of into a relative sentence, like you do in the Swedish abstract.

l3 "In cases like these" It is unclear what "these" refers to here.

l9 "in the environment invasive species" "invasive species" is a proper noun, so it should be separated in one of the following forms:

  1. capitalize: Invasive Species,
  2. quote: "invasive species", or
  3. emphasize (put in italics): \emph{invasive species}

Also, you monotonously repeat "environment invasive species" three times. Try to eliminate this redundancy.