Closed mikasenghaas closed 1 year ago
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ludekcizinsky
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1 year ago overall very nice job! I like the structure. I ran the text via Grammarly, some parts, I tried to simplify a bit. I think the major change is in how the architecture is explained where I actually changed it to sentences. I feel like if your mom reads it, then it is easier for her this way. Whereas it someone experienced reads, they just look at the figure and know. Also added myself as co-author, hope you do not mind :D
Not 100% happy yet, but wanted to have you have a read through it anyway and get your opinion.