Open chrisdburr opened 1 year ago
[x] @chrisdburr I have added an explanatory sentence after this: https://github.com/alan-turing-institute/turing-commons/blob/45bc1bec19fdff98c05ccc06b6138329d23d176d/drafts/rri-skillstrack/rri-modules/root-files/rri-204-2.md?plain=1#L59
[x] @chrisdburr I think something may be missing to this phrase: https://github.com/alan-turing-institute/turing-commons/blob/45bc1bec19fdff98c05ccc06b6138329d23d176d/drafts/rri-skillstrack/rri-modules/root-files/rri-204-2.md?plain=1#L106
@ClauFischer, please take a look at this revised section when you have a chance:
@chrisdburr:
[x] Here it says recommending when it should only be predicting at this stage. https://github.com/alan-turing-institute/turing-commons/blob/a9e0b01479067bdb2e0f3d18e6551accd657f289/drafts/rri-skillstrack/rri-modules/root-files/rri-204-2.md?plain=1#L50
[x] I think that if we are changing to a recommender system now we should say something about it being a different model (that it's now a recommender system and not only a predictive system). https://github.com/alan-turing-institute/turing-commons/blob/a9e0b01479067bdb2e0f3d18e6551accd657f289/drafts/rri-skillstrack/rri-modules/root-files/rri-204-2.md?plain=1#L58
[x] Perhaps a footnote should be added to say that there may be fault in the fact that the model is discriminating based on locations, even though there is no error in the way the model is operating (it's the data pipeline). Although, on the other hand, you have already mentioned that the practice is ethically-dubious. https://github.com/alan-turing-institute/turing-commons/blob/a9e0b01479067bdb2e0f3d18e6551accd657f289/drafts/rri-skillstrack/rri-modules/root-files/rri-204-2.md?plain=1#L65
Let me know what you think about these suggestions and I can draft some amendments and send them for your revision 😃
I think I've answered all your comments. Main changes are as follows:
@chrisdburr Is this paper (https://citeseerx.ist.psu.edu/document?repid=rep1&type=pdf&doi=36708ab24406aa3ec931fb9ba3f4a6cd7c3bd4b6) the one you want to refer to in this line https://github.com/alan-turing-institute/turing-commons/blob/ce85f445030fb9d36578b502a166bd7c26030614/drafts/rri-skillstrack/rri-modules/root-files/rri-204-2.md?plain=1#L164 ?
Right now, both links take you to the Washington Post article. I searched through our conversations and the paper I just posted was the one I sent as more academic. If it is not, let me know please so I can link to the correct paper.
I think I was intending for the second link to be the Guardian article you shared: https://www.theguardian.com/global/2017/nov/20/dynamic-personalised-pricing
I guess I didn't copy/paste the link properly. Sorry.
The following root file has been created:
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Link to file: https://github.com/alan-turing-institute/turing-commons/blob/drafts/drafts/rri-skillstrack/rri-modules/root-files/rri-204-2.md