Great job! I have a few annotations spread throughout. Here are the major takeaways:
• I dislike how you refer to your work as a MILP PAP. You are not solving the position allocation problem, you are solving battery electric bus charging and you build upon the PAP. You certainly do not just solve the PAP. Plus, the PAP is already a MILP, so that modifier doesn’t really add anything.
• Ch 1: Remove the objectives subsection and just state the contributions of your work in a similar way to how you would state it in the paper. Make sure to include all of your contributions
• Ch 2: Pull in any of the background from ch 3 and ch 4 as well as the latest background info you wrote in the latest paper
• Ch 3: Rename this section and spell out any abbreviations in the title. Move the intro material to chapter 2.
• Ch 4: Ditto chapter 3
• Ch 5: See minor annotations
Great job! I have a few annotations spread throughout. Here are the major takeaways: • I dislike how you refer to your work as a MILP PAP. You are not solving the position allocation problem, you are solving battery electric bus charging and you build upon the PAP. You certainly do not just solve the PAP. Plus, the PAP is already a MILP, so that modifier doesn’t really add anything. • Ch 1: Remove the objectives subsection and just state the contributions of your work in a similar way to how you would state it in the paper. Make sure to include all of your contributions • Ch 2: Pull in any of the background from ch 3 and ch 4 as well as the latest background info you wrote in the latest paper • Ch 3: Rename this section and spell out any abbreviations in the title. Move the intro material to chapter 2. • Ch 4: Ditto chapter 3 • Ch 5: See minor annotations