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Second project of 2023-2024 year which aims recreating a faithful Pac-Man clone in assembly x86 using DOSBox 🕹️
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Technical Specification #23

Closed thomas-planchard closed 11 months ago

thomas-planchard commented 11 months ago
Here is a list of all the mistakes in the Technical specification. Word# Mistake Type Explanation
19 Spelling "Graphism" should be "Graphics"
19 Spelling "alterning" should be "alternating"
19 Spelling "mouse" should be "mouth"
19 Grammar "Pac-Man has also 2 different sprites" should be "Pac-Man also has 2 different sprites"
41 Spelling "alterning" should be "alternating"
51 Spelling "ned" should be "end"
65 Spelling "diferent" should be "different"
69 Spelling "mesaurements" should be "measurements"
81 Spelling "Patern" should be "Pattern"
83 Spelling "comportment" should be "behavior"
87 Grammar "between him and Blinky" should be "between him and Blinky's position"
91 Grammar "frightened anymore" should be "no longer frightened"
93 Spelling "colides" should be "collides"
97 Spelling "rendring" should be "rendering"
99 Spelling "depenging" should be "depending"
111 Spelling "Fuit" should be "Fruit"
113 Spelling "inputed" should be "input"
121 Grammar "all progression is lost" should be "all progress is lost"
125 Spelling "difirent" should be "different"
129 Spelling "compiled program" should be "compiled program's"
129 Grammar "executed on the same platform" should be "executed in the same environment"
133 Spelling "ot" should be "it"
137 Spelling "appearition" should be "appearance"
143 Spelling "level is finished" should be "level is completed"
145 Grammar "he goes back" should be "it goes back"
147 Spelling "ned" should be "end"
155 Grammar "level 256" should be "level 256,"
157 Spelling "realisation" should be "realization"
161 Spelling "DOSBox's" should be "DOSBox"
161 Grammar "run on different platforms" should be "run on different operating systems"
169 Spelling "pallet" should be "palette"
171 Spelling "palette colour" should be "palette colors"
173 Spelling "delays" should be "Delays"
173 Grammar "extra hours" should be "additional time"
175 Grammar "the needed colours" should be "the required colors"
Malo-Archimbaud commented 11 months ago

technical-specifications.md

leo-chartier commented 11 months ago

This I saw that could be improved on the document:

Please add more code and diagrams to help understand how the code should work.

thomas-planchard commented 11 months ago

I saw a lot of typos and grammar mistakes. Here are few examples: ("each ghosts" line 70), ("two separate sprite"line 70), ("the ghost are" line 73), ("animation than before" line 73),("it's eyes remains" line 74) My advise to you is to install the grammarly extension on vscode and solve all your typos

Malo-Archimbaud commented 11 months ago

technical-specifications.md