Weekly report 49 correction

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"We realized that our sprite maze was actually a bad idea." Here, the sprite is part of the maze, so you must write it like this : We realized that our maze sprite was actually a bad idea.

"Because to determine the game's borders and ensure that our pac man doesn't cross the walls, with a sprite maze it's going to be too complicated to determine." Here is better way to say it : We had to determine the game's borders to ensure that our Pac-Man doesn't cross the walls, but with a maze sprite, it would have been too complicated to do.

"This means we'd have to code pixel by pixel to determine which pixels are crossed and which are not." Here is a little rephrasing : It means that we would have to code pixel by pixel to determine which pixels are crossed and which are not.

"All we have to do is determine which color not to cross." Make all the sentence at the same tense : All we had to do was to determine which color not to cross.

"It'll be much simpler and much faster. Instead of defining each pixel of the maze sprite." Same as before, all the sentences must be at the same tense and since this situation happened, you can use "was" : It was much simpler and faster. Instead of doing it pixel by pixel.

"Junior Software Engineer" If you talk about both software engineers, you must put an S at "Engineer", but if it's only one you can put his name, which is Habi Cailleau.

"Our QA is just finishing writing his test plan." Here is a rephrasing : Our QA finished writing the test plan and the test cases.

"He is currently adding a table of content to his test plan." No need to say this since I've done it before this week.

"Once his test plan is finished, corrected and checked, he'll turn his attention to testing our prototype, which is due to be finished by the end of this week." Since this a past action, you can say like this : After the QA finished, corrected and checked the test plan, he turned his attention on the prototype, which must be done before Monday 5pm.

"To solve our delay problem and ensure delivery of our game on the right date. This week, the Program Manager and Le techlead will be working in cohesion with our Junior Software Engineer to move forward as quickly and efficiently as possible on our game." You can turn this in a single sentence : To solve our delay issue and to ensure the delivery of our game on the right date, the Program Manager and the Techlead worked in cohesion with our Junior Software Engineer to make progress as quickly and efficiently as possible on our game. (if it's only one dev, say its name, or if it's both you must put an "s" to make it plural)

"In the meantime, the QA will continue drafting its test plan, as described above." Put the sentence at the same tense of the previous ones : In the meantime, the QA continued drafting his test plan, as described above.

"The project manager will then write all the documents he's supposed to hand in, and once finished, he'll also help the software engineers with the development of our game." Same tense as before : The Project Manager the wrote all the documents he was supposed to hand in. Once he was done, he then helped the Software Engineers with the game development.

"Raphael " you forgot the ¨ on your name you silly.

"Change on the Maze" you must put an "s" on "change" since there are several changes.

"We've decided to code the maze in ascii code. And we succeeded, but it took a long time. So here's a picture of our maze in ascii code, once finished." Good sentence overall, but u can put done instead of finished : ...once its done

"Our junior software engineers have to bring our prototype forward for delivery on Monday 12/112023." you forgot a / on the date

"We have to start drafting our oral and our slide show in two weeks' time." no need ' on weeks

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This issue will be closed when the weeklyreport will be done corrected.

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Here is a second correction, since some modifications have been made:

"The Project Manager the wrote all the documents he was supposed to hand in" forgot the "n": The Project Manager then wrote....

"Our junior software engineers have to bring our prototype forward for delivery on Monday 12/112023." you forgot the "/" on the date : .... 12/11/2023.