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Weekly report 47 correction #6

Closed Manech-Laguens closed 10 months ago

Manech-Laguens commented 10 months ago

"For this week, the deveollepers began work on the maze. And tried to get the pac man character to react to the borders. To prevent them from crossing the walls." Rephrase it like that : For this week, the developers began to work on the maze. They tried to get the Pac-Man character to react to the borders, so it wont cross the walls.

"Sofware Engineer" Make it look like the others : Software Engineer

"Our QA has started writing the Test Plan that will be used to test our working Pac Man prototype." I'd say this : Our QA continued to write the Test Plan that we will use to test our working version of Pac-Man.

"laguens" Since it's a name, the L is in caps : Laguens

"*Rémy Charles & Thibaud Marlier" Make it look like the others : Rémy Charles & Thibaud Marlier

"This document is available as a clickable link in the "Management" document." Here is a slight change to make it more understandable: This document is available as a clickable link in the "Management" folder.

"Then The trello was updated, the tasks for each role and the rest of the week was shared." Here a little changes : Then the trello was updated, the tasks for each role and the rest of the week were shared.

"As you can see from the photo above. We have a color problem we can not understand the color. To know if it's hexadecimal or not." I suggest you to rephrase it like this : As you can see from the photo above, we have a color problem: we cant understand if it's hexadecimal or not.

"Below is another photo of our maze where we managed to unify the color. But we don't have our final color." Rephrase it like that : Below is another image of our maze where we managed to unify the colors, but it’s still not the final one.

This sentence is good, just change two words : ....we need to work on the direction of our Pac-Man and change the face of our Pac-Man with his mouth open and closed.

Same as previously, change a word to change : The Program Manager will help the techlead to finish writing and formatting the technical due to 11/27/2023.

Manech-Laguens commented 10 months ago

This issue has already been solved.