Some elements are missing/wrong in the technical (/documents/technical-specifications/technical-specification.md) and should be updated as soon as possible.
Severity
Critical (Severe impact)
Version
a4ad752
Expected Correction
Line 88
Blurry explanations
Current:
When the cable is wrapped and the box is in a locked state, the device is looking for any physical disturbances. If any movement or vibration of the box is detected as a possible theft, it turns on a strong alarm, more or less loud according to the level of disturbance (intensity and duration of the movement). At the same time, it sends a warning notification to the owner by a dedicated smartphone application, using the internet network.
Expected:
When the cable is wrapped and the lock is in a locked state, the device is sensitive to any disturbance. Suppose a movement or vibration of the box is detected as a possible theft. It turns on an alarm, with a sound intensity proportional to the motion detected (intensity and duration of the movement). At the same time, it sends a warning notification to the owner by a dedicated smartphone application, using the 2G network.
Line 140
Confusing sentence
Current:
To dive into the electronic circuits of the PCB, there is the [PCB circuit schematic](data/SportShield-Electronics-diagram.png) provided by the company. However, this scematic is not up to date. The most important is the absence of the Q5 MOSFET used to cut the battery to other components using the control pin D9.
Expected:
To dive into the electronic circuits of the PCB, there is the [PCB circuit schematic](data/SportShield-Electronics-diagram.png) provided by the company. However, this schematic is not up to date. The most important point is the absence of the Q5 MOSFET. This component is principally used to cut power supply to other components using the control pin D9.
Line 172
Confusing sentence
Current:
On the IDE, there is a some buttons on the top like that :
Expected:
On the IDE, there are some buttons on the top organized as follows:
Description
Some elements are missing/wrong in the technical
(/documents/technical-specifications/technical-specification.md)and should be updated as soon as possible.Severity
Version
a4ad752
Expected Correction
Line 88
Blurry explanations
Current:
When the cable is wrapped and the box is in a locked state, the device is looking for any physical disturbances. If any movement or vibration of the box is detected as a possible theft, it turns on a strong alarm, more or less loud according to the level of disturbance (intensity and duration of the movement). At the same time, it sends a warning notification to the owner by a dedicated smartphone application, using the internet network.Expected:
When the cable is wrapped and the lock is in a locked state, the device is sensitive to any disturbance. Suppose a movement or vibration of the box is detected as a possible theft. It turns on an alarm, with a sound intensity proportional to the motion detected (intensity and duration of the movement). At the same time, it sends a warning notification to the owner by a dedicated smartphone application, using the 2G network.Line 140
Confusing sentence
Current:
To dive into the electronic circuits of the PCB, there is the [PCB circuit schematic](data/SportShield-Electronics-diagram.png) provided by the company. However, this scematic is not up to date. The most important is the absence of the Q5 MOSFET used to cut the battery to other components using the control pin D9.Expected:
To dive into the electronic circuits of the PCB, there is the [PCB circuit schematic](data/SportShield-Electronics-diagram.png) provided by the company. However, this schematic is not up to date. The most important point is the absence of the Q5 MOSFET. This component is principally used to cut power supply to other components using the control pin D9.Line 172
Confusing sentence
Current:
On the IDE, there is a some buttons on the top like that :Expected:
On the IDE, there are some buttons on the top organized as follows:Other Details
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