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alphagov / verify-local-patterns

Project board - https://github.com/alphagov/verify-local-patterns/projects/1 ||||| This is a prototype of some content that will be included in the GOV.UK Service Toolkit about the best practice for councils to deliver two services - parking permits and concessionary travel. The repo also includes a working prototype of both services which follows the guidance, as delivered by the fictional council of Argleton.
https://github.com/alphagov/verify-local-patterns/projects/1
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Check if you need a permit - what's the advice we can offer for full address search? #726

Open EUzkuraityte opened 6 years ago

EUzkuraityte commented 6 years ago

@lizziebruce @sanjaypoyzer we did not provide example pages for full address search. Please have a look at the attached and advice: Address lookup screen shot 2017-10-19 at 13 42 46 screen shot 2017-10-19 at 13 48 19 screen shot 2017-10-19 at 13 48 57

lizziebruce commented 6 years ago
  1. "Address" should be lower case on the CTA buttons copy. Only the first word of any CTA should be capitalised.
  2. Colon not ellipsis please e.g. "We found the following addresses:" not "We found the following addresses..."
  3. Shouldn't put "Verify postcode", it's not plain English. This whole screen however is unnecessary. Please see my separate feedback notes.
EUzkuraityte commented 6 years ago

Lizzie's notes:

/check-boundary page - after address picker, goes to unneeded screen "Verify Postcode"

EUzkuraityte commented 6 years ago

Tagging @joannesouthern to the issue

lizziebruce commented 6 years ago

If the address is eligible the user should be taken straight from the address picker to the resident choice page, removing these two screens from their journey:

screen shot 2017-10-25 at 10 16 22 screen shot 2017-10-25 at 10 16 31

If the address is ineligible, the first screen is not needed and the second needs copy edits (please see my notes in #728 )

joanneSouthern commented 6 years ago

done in test Changed the look of the navigation and typos. The 'Verify Postcode' button is in there as it fires off the postcode check in the database as well as determining which button to display if valid or not. lee did try to incorporate this code into the 'Choose address' button, but broke the whole form!

EUzkuraityte commented 6 years ago

ah, well this could be something to look into during private beta..