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alphagov / verify-local-patterns

Project board - https://github.com/alphagov/verify-local-patterns/projects/1 ||||| This is a prototype of some content that will be included in the GOV.UK Service Toolkit about the best practice for councils to deliver two services - parking permits and concessionary travel. The repo also includes a working prototype of both services which follows the guidance, as delivered by the fictional council of Argleton.
https://github.com/alphagov/verify-local-patterns/projects/1
MIT License
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Vehicle ownership doc upload - copy #737

Open EUzkuraityte opened 6 years ago

EUzkuraityte commented 6 years ago

Lizzie's comments

  1. Remove 'Upload' from page title.
  2. Intro sentence suggested rewrite "To prove ownership upload one of these:"
  3. Why is the copy in bold included? This repeats the information above.
EUzkuraityte commented 6 years ago

tagging @joannesouthern to this

joanneSouthern commented 6 years ago

done in test

EUzkuraityte commented 6 years ago

Sounds great, if you could let em know once that's done on this form (https://form.northumberland.gov.uk/form/launch/parking_permit) too, that'd be great!