I personally find it puts me into a defensive mindset when I read sentences that start with look,. I removed them because I don't feel it impacts the sentiment of the statements.
@kevinlondon I appreciate this PR. My style was a bit too conversational here, and I agree that the tone of "Look," could be seen as confrontational. I merge these changes gladly -- thanks!
I personally find it puts me into a defensive mindset when I read sentences that start with
look,
. I removed them because I don't feel it impacts the sentiment of the statements.