Current: "their goal of encapsulate and"
Suggested Fix: "their goal to encapsulate and"
Current: "create a a kind of"
Suggested Fix: "create a kind of"
Current: "between students the ideas contained"
Suggested Fix: "between students and the ideas contained"
Current: "Describe college, including what is, how"
Suggested Fix: "Describe college, including what it is, how"
Current: "Sessions should leave this session"
Suggested Fix: "Students should leave this session"
Less sure about these:
Current: "one of three outputs: admit or deny. (One might also explain wait lists)."
Maybe? "one of two outputs: admit or deny. (One might also explain a third output of wait lists)."
Current: "Given an example of a function that reflects"
Maybe? "Give an example of a function that reflects"
Current: "the concept of functions, given students a sense"
Maybe? "the concept of functions, giving students a sense"
Current: "some position personal about fairness."
Maybe? "some personal position about fairness."
Where: https://criticallyconsciouscomputing.org/abstractions#header-9 Current: "printing something output in Python" Suggested Fix: "printing some output in Python"
Current: "their goal of encapsulate and" Suggested Fix: "their goal to encapsulate and"
Current: "create a a kind of" Suggested Fix: "create a kind of"
Current: "between students the ideas contained" Suggested Fix: "between students and the ideas contained"
Current: "Describe college, including what is, how" Suggested Fix: "Describe college, including what it is, how"
Current: "Sessions should leave this session" Suggested Fix: "Students should leave this session"
Less sure about these:
Current: "one of three outputs: admit or deny. (One might also explain wait lists)." Maybe? "one of two outputs: admit or deny. (One might also explain a third output of wait lists)."
Current: "Given an example of a function that reflects" Maybe? "Give an example of a function that reflects"
Current: "the concept of functions, given students a sense" Maybe? "the concept of functions, giving students a sense"
Current: "some position personal about fairness." Maybe? "some personal position about fairness."