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Assembly Bias Fitting Paper
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concluding statement #26

Closed andrew-zentner closed 8 years ago

andrew-zentner commented 8 years ago

as suggested by @aphearin : here's a spitball for a strong statement to end on. something along the lines of how accounting for assembly bias is not optional if cosmological precision is desired, that our results demonstrate that necessity, and that we have just given an explicit example of the way forward.

aphearin commented 8 years ago

The concluding statement introduced in https://github.com/andrew-zentner/abmcmc/commit/eae3f0640c1ca04774d0f5ac656277f325f14594 by @andrew-zentner looks solid to me.

aphearin commented 8 years ago

In https://github.com/andrew-zentner/abmcmc/commit/eae3f0640c1ca04774d0f5ac656277f325f14594 you also introduce an entirely new Section dedicated to Interpretation. However, I think this is probably not warranted since we really only need a paragraph or two here, so maybe consider having Interpretation be a subsection of the Conclusions?

I'm taking a stab at composing a few paragraphs for this purpose now.

andrew-zentner commented 8 years ago

Concluding paragraph now in draft.