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Assembly Bias Fitting Paper
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revisions to Interpretation section #30

Closed aphearin closed 8 years ago

aphearin commented 8 years ago

Minor changes to existing text in Interpretation section. Plus one new final paragraph added to Interpretation section.

I also think that the Interpretation could tightened a little bit, @andrew-zentner. The two paragraphs beginning with "Another possibility" and "This 'splashback' hypothesis" are a little repetitive; the second of these two paragraphs doesn't add much, so consider combining these two.

I would like to see the concluding paragraph to the Interpretation section that I wrote with this PR, but if you think this is beating a dead horse then it's fine by me if this is removed. Maybe @vdbosch69 can also weigh in here.