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This is a repo for the IETF Internet Draft about constrained vouchers in CBOR
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constrained-join proxy comments about Discovery that belong here #224

Closed mcr closed 2 years ago

mcr commented 2 years ago

6.5.1. Discovery

The Pledge discovers an IP address and port number that connects to the Registrar (possibly via a Join Proxy), and it establishes a DTLS connection.

This is very terse and possibly not completely correct.

How about:

The Pledge discovers an IP address and UDP port number which together allow the
pledge to establish a DTLS connection to the Registrar, directly via a UDP
port of the Registrar or via a UDP port of a BRSKI-DTLS Join Proxy.

Is this a correct expansion ?